this was enjoyable, cause enjoyed it, alot, and read the whole thing, lmlo....cool stuff, flow was deeecent, you know, but then again, no one's is ever really perfect, nah saying? yeah, but one thing bothered me, rhyming scythe with scene? i dunno if you have an accent or anything, but yeah, that bothered me, other than that....this was pretty cool, stay up, keep writing bizznitch

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