TONY SELF TRACK EXCLUSIVE
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Aiyo Tony...ur flow is always nice...and ur delivery is normally good. But, I'd like to hear you manipulate your voice more. I know it's probably tough with a deep voice. But, Biggie Smalls has a deep voice and he was very expressive with his delivery.
With that said, the beat is pretty coo here...
Wassup with a hook?...Your verse ended and there was nothing but the beat playing in the background.
dawg...u need hooks or somethin over the breaks
the third verse almost sounded experimental
This was solid because there wasn't anything major either way...But, as a "song" it was lacking.
RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218805