Nice shit man. I liked the short lines, thought it was different since aint no one really write they stuff like that on here. Vocab was cool for this piece, i guess it would flow, like Shazz said it depends on the beat u kno. Otha than that it was cool. Nice drop man. Please return the favor on my open mic called Runnin' or Ready For War Pt. 1 whichever u want. Links in my sig. Peace.