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Old 01-05-06, 04:14 PM   #7
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Aight...the beat is nice...flow and delivery are pretty nice...first time hearing ya i think voice sounds original...lyrics are str8...you need a hook on this...second verse is coo delivery is abit different...[Insert hook here->] [/Hook] lol j/p anyway third verse is nice to lyrics still nice...this would be a dope track if you laid down a hook on it...quality is decnt over-all nice ish man keep it up.

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