listnin....
don't like the hook 2 much, like inter said ur definitely 2 close to the mic, n u dont put much energy into the hook
u got good presence and energy on both verses tho, flow is on point
not bad, i'd give it an 8-8.5/10
and btw, u should change ur name back to unf or bdaniel or sumthin... young unf can be an aka or sumthin, but there's already too many rappers named young or lil