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Old 01-06-06, 04:55 AM   #6
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Voted For: Terumoto

Drakel

everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
^ hmm not really feelin it to be honest

i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
^ ok bar nice wordplay...

and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
^ hmm ok nothin special

i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
^ blah again not feelin it only in my "meh ok" list

i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
^ 1st line self-g 2nd line...meh the Nos/omb connection is faded now IMO

just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
^ again 1st line self-g 2nd line starts self-g but Aus connection cool

dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
^ ok bar...the in-vest bit was coo i ain't seen before so original on ya part

its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
^ closer ok...nothing special though

Overall
Average verse...some bars were good where as others lacked in places...a lil too much self-g you need to work on that...text flow and layout is good you obviously got that sorted...but it's ya wording and imagery in places that let ya down IMO

Terumoto

Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
^ penis thing...i unno prolly been used before...but funny(ish)

Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
^ lol @ 2nd line...1st line though self-g

Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
^ LOL @ 2nd line keepin the rhymes up too feelin this bar prolly the best bar of the battle

Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
^ LOL at 2nd line...rhymes cool too

but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
^ self-g but connection is hard hittin nice diss on his topical skills

Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
^ ok bar regular diss nice rhyme flows cool

Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
^ lol @ this bar...audio verse (impersonating him) woulda made it better

shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
^ ok closer nothing special though

Overall
Terumoto same scenario some bars were dope some were nothin more than ok...however rhyme wise and dissin wise you got mans here on this occasion the veteran hooker bar killed it...

V/Terumoto Not an easy win...and i know you can drop harder than this but Drakel wasn't as consistant in my eyes...keep droppin though both an aight battle
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