atticus - dope and vivid as usual, a well concealed and expressed view...short but sweet

Its...nothing, all my fucking emotions fall dry,
eyes lit of fires sit expired to a broken cry.

tech - not bad, not too consistent i thought, and some lines seemed awry for your choice in direction...but none-the-less, it was clear and visual, and a nice addition to this compilation

You'd Be As Mad As Me, If You Had The Key
To Open Doors To Have A Life Half As Bad As Me

narc-uzi - meh, wasn't really feeling yours, only because of your structure...i think you tried waaay to hard to make it perfect, and presentable....really strained some of your lines/rhymes....but not bad, i think if you concentrated more on just writing, if would have been better, keep up

Mezmorised by the polygons that are falling on my conscience
Realized the controlling of life is the cause of all my problems

mystic chaos - i really think you tried to hard to rhyme everything, and actually took away from your piece, because i liked your direction, and the ideas you had.....and your rhyme scheme was fucked, sorry, but this was pretty messy...but overall, i liked what you were saying, just make it a little more concise

Rappidly swaying, Illusively, back and forth like hung cot's..
Time's not a factor, although the movement staggers at each notch

chymera - seriously, i think the best part of this collab...everything was short, yet perfectly established the view, direction and emotion you were expressing, awesome...i can't pick a favourite bar, because i liked the whole thing, well done

mentalz - liked this, it was good, some neat lines, creative, and smart, good multies, and nice closer, keep up

It wreaks from pores, engrossed readily.. steadily swaying
As The Pendulum Swings heavily across the aging painting

keep up to all, nice work

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