Hook is kinda crap

Q, the first half of ur verse has some absolutely canibus toppin vocab and metaphors...some ill ass multi's. ur flow slows up n down and ur rhymeschme switches up constantly which keeps interest..i think ur verse is solid bordering coo, but fix that hook man, not sure how its jus meh to me...also i think ur mixed down a lil loud

Excetera, ur quality is looking poor next to this, it sounds like its got dat phone filter on it..lyrics r coo, ur flow is too slow at points, and its like ur missin an extra word from ya lines cos u finish before the snare den try hop onto a snare hitting flo...delivery is aight, id say work on ya flow n buy a new mic...

what beat is this?id love to kick a sixteen on this, get @ me plz

safe

RTF Excetera.1

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