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Old 01-08-06, 02:55 PM   #10
GKillaz05
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Tha 1 An Onlii B:
Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
6/10 - Good Personal.
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
6/10 - Good Punch.
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
6/10 - Good Punch.
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
7/10 - Good Wordplay.
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"
5/10 - OK.
30/50
You had a good verse, it flowed well you had good personals, and punchlines and it flowed well.

OSB:
This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
5/10 - Good Personal.
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
7/10 - Good Personal.
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
5/10 - Ok.
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
5/10 - ok.
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*
6/10
28/30

You had a ok flow, your punches were good, some good personals and ok wordplay.

Vote - Tha
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