LMAO @ this beat...I just dissed EC on this beat

motherfuck

hjahaa

well...how about this for comparative purposes


flow is fine...


lyrics lose me at spots


iono dawg


My mind wanders a couple times

but ur delivery is fine on this


not bad


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EDIT...That was for State of Mind...I hate when songs start playin on S/C and u think it's the song ur supposed to be critiquin


anyway...hook sounds pretty good...the 1st cat's rhyming was simple...but his flow wasn't bad at all

there are dead spots in his flow that have me wonderin "where's the rest"


UNF...ur EQ levels are way too different from Dukes...u needed to match his tone as much as possible...u come in out of no where...u need a better lead in...which is something I've said to you 100000x now...

flow was good tho


not a bad track


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