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Old 01-08-06, 06:37 PM   #8
Past Tense
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Voted For: Poetic Artist

Ok checkin this out right now......

Poetic - The beat is good.....ya flow is good....and the quality is def. better then ya last track lol.....your lyrics were a lot better too....but you need too work on ur breath control and emotion..and you'd be a lot better.....this.....LMAO @ The outro....thats fucking great......everyone basiclly sayin fuck him.....THATS GREAT!!!

Hopesfall - Your flow was not that great..your beat choice is a love beat come on man...whats that..and I couldn't really understand what daubs was sayin...but you really need too work on ya lyrics and delivery..cuz this sounds awful....keep upping tho

Overall I belive ysdat just came harder in all aspects...lmao and singing is for love songs man so your makin Poetic a Love Song?? LMFAO hahhhahhahaha that shit is great man....

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