Voted For: GKillaz05

aight this was a good battle this....

Gkillaz, you had some nice hard-hittin punches in your verse, like this one:
Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak...
Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique...

^^^that woz decent, and you pulled off quite a nice multi there aswell. you stayed consistent with your punches throughout your verse which is a good thing, and it flowed well, and had a good structure aswell.

sabre, you had some decent punchlines aswell (the one about the new york times), but you had a few played & simple ones aswell, such as this one:
this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt
all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out

^^that woz kinda basic. i think thats what gave Gkillaz the win, because he had more of a consistant verse. i think he had a better rhyme scheme aswell. your flow was good though, and your structure was fine, just work on your creativity nd stuff.

good battle but v/Gkillaz

no hate..................

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