Voted For: Daubs

Daubs:

I looked into your talent..for ages but i aint finding none
and you aint elevated from battle one..
..how the fuck you gonna be rising,sun
^^good opener ok bar 5/10
So you are rising sun..who knows where your rising from
back after you left?..i never EVEN noticed you were gone
^^ehh 4/10
Fuck what you bring..
the only reason your SLIGHTLY close to me 'sing
is the fact you got nearly as many losses as I have wins
^^ok personal 5/10
i find your concepts lying in bins, showin you garbage
though you may be running the scene...til i snap ya cartlidge
^^ehh 3/10
i mean, your countrys even ashamed of where you come from
so il just key a half ass....to own a full one
^^ok 5/10

Overall: 22/50 (44%)


Rising Sun:

Like ~Randy Moss~ I’m a Viking – William the Conqueror – that’ll ~wreck this British~
I ~expect to finish~, ~Dandy-Daubs~ who ~can’t stand the loss~
I ~can’t be stopped~ cause your loss is predictable like a ~bandit’s plot~
^^decent opener ok multies but thats it 6/20
And like ~Marcus Camby blocks~, I’ll send you ~back home~
I ~crack domes~ cause I’m tight like Vida Guerra’s ~black thongs~
You could ~act strong~ but you got your ~facts wrong~ cause you got whack ~rap songs~
^^no 3/20
If you ever wanna *blow up* you better start praying to God in ~heaven~
Cause you never rode the tube on the morning of ~July the 7th~
^^wtf 0/10
Shallow my pride and I’ll ~die a legend~ like an Oldsmobile ~Cutlass~
Good ~luck vet~ cause I pounded you more than a slut’s ~butt gets~
Even if you were under the tutelage of Shakespeare, you couldn’t formu-late a ~couplet~
^^last line made sense at least rest was garbage 2/20

Overall: 11/70 (16%)


Vote: Daubs


I Didnt even know how to judge RS's verse it was that weak


RTF with an honest vote on the battle in my sig plz!

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