Voted For: Drakel

Rising Sun:

Drakel claims he’s ~classic~ but even Michael Crichton would consider him ~Jurassic~
~Act quick~ cause I’ll do three ~back flips~ and execute a double black belt karate ~class kick~
My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~….
Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~
Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~
I’ll ~damage ya~ with magical skills like I’m ~David Blaine~, and you should be ~ashamed to say~
That you named yourself after a video ~game~
And while you ~spit flows~, I’ll make your ~bitch blow~, every time her ~lips glow~
The type to ~hit hoes~, you better ~get low~ cause I’ll torture you like a troop at ~GITMO~
Admit your ~shit yo~ cause your facing ~ridicule~ when times are ~critical~
You could turn away from rap, start golfing, and you still wouldn’t be “hitting” your ~pinnacle~

^^ Usually i break down verses bar for bar but since your structure is fucked i cant really do that... SOOOOOO overall your verse was weak all you had was multies, the punches were subpar no good metas or personals. Your verse practically consisted of nothing.

Overall: 10/60 (17%)


Drakel:

got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked
cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink
^^good opener nice meta 7/10
your sun aint rising, its setting....your day is through
keep all your ass lines, and you deserve this moon
^^ok bar coulda been worded better 5/10
i hate that stupid avy, all you faggot newbs think its awesome
just look at that record...(ahhh)....20 fucking losses
^^lol humor 4/10
im just collossus, i know i intimmidate this whore
shit, he has more sweat on his psalms, than liars in court
^^good bar 6/10
leave him speechless, i rip him to pieces, leave'em faceless
the bitch is at a loss for more words, that missin dictionary pages
^^ok meta 5/10
this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done
cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned
^^couple good metas here, ok closer 6/10

Overall: 33/60 (55%)


Vote: Drakel


RTF with an honest vote on the battle in my sig plz!!!

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