Nice, i loved the words in this. The flow was nice and like i said b4 vocab was great. The topic was different than alot of otha om's ive read which is good. And ive heard 2pac's version b4 so it was nice to see a person tryin to come up with their own. My favorite line was definitely "I don’t care where you work, I just care if you work!". Theres so much truth to that line, u kno. But anways i'd give this piece an 8.5/10. Nice work, please return the favor on my om called Runnin'. Peace.