this would be probably one of my favs by you man, though your pronounciation was a lil weak but you got better through on. the flow was good and as well was the delivery. punchlines were hittin good, not much personals but you were some what creative and kept the diss goin nice job. but the main thing is, is that you came out dope and you changed your voice a lot towards that end, not bad I liked this one man.

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