listening as I type...good mix on my intro....ok...yea u opened wit a much improved flow....last track I heard of u, ya flow was weak...its pretty good here.....u got sum nice jabs....alot multies, alil too multie focused u got sum filler bars jus to get those multies in there I noticed...addlibs is koo.....alot of these disses is personailized, I dun really keep up wit dudes to kno all u talking bout but u flowed it nicely an delivery was decent, coulda been more animated though....ok beat switch....ok heard phase one diss....eh...u jus makign statements at him...u needed to have a ill flip on how he's wack instead of jus sayin he's wack....however liked how u used ya voice on second beat..u animated it alot better...ok son how long is this is track?....ok impersonations is kinda funny but could been a tad more exaggerated to really make it a kneeslapper...damn long diss....lol@at the "fuck a" outro....pretty good shit all in all son...keep it up!

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