deffo needs improving...beat wasn't feelin it i got the laugh @ the beginning...1st dude wasn't bad flow was ok...mic quality needed upp in a lil Para ya verse was...ok...at best...lyrics were what helped ya verse most coz ya flow was off emotion is improved as is presence but it still needs improving...but noticable elevation is occouring in each drop you do...ya getting there...slowly but it's happening...
keep droppin...and get a better mic
