Voted For: Mentalz

v/mentalz

i think oz. didn't really go too much indepth with his, it was easy, and he basically just grazed on the topic....focused too much on rhyming it. mentalz came here with a vivid story of a guy who let it all slip away from him, and i really liked it, even though it should've been longer, well, it seemed like it easily could've, but yeah, mentalz definately came with a nice piece here, good job to both

rtf on this with an explained vote please
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219121

v/mentalz

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