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Old 01-11-06, 01:02 AM   #12
Ca'lam
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word.. qualiy is straight..


Chorus -i thought it was a decent chorus.. flow was aight in it.. rhyme scheme was original.. like the ending bars of the chorus..


verses - i didnt really liek your rhhyme schemes.. but thats just a personal thing.. for what you were doing, it worked.. flow was straight i thought.. lyrics were good.. had me bobbin sometimes..

overall not your best song in my opinion.. but it was a solid track..

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