Voted For: Blackmage

v/blackmage

gkillaz, your stuff was played, not really creative, and lacked enjoyment, because basically you just try and focus on rhyming, and that's only cool in audio, text, you need to be more creative, if you try and elevate, you could be dope at punchlines, but you focus too much on basic shit, like i said, it might be better audio, but not text....blackmage, not bad, it was kinda weak, just basically poiting out obvious shit and saying it, not really personals, nothing special anyways, opener was cool, but you can still elevate, keep up, this woulda probly been cool audio too

rtf on this with an explained vote please
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219121

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