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Old 01-11-06, 07:43 AM   #26
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Gifted ~ didn't think you come well at all to be honest
you didnt really have any punches or personal's.. Flow
was alright nothing great, proper lacking complexity &
a decent rhyme scheme. not much word play and your
verse could have been directed at anyone.

Not bad but elevate, look into the person your battling
next time the littlest thing about them can be used as
a personal. OneStep used the fact that you spell lyrically
wrong that sort of thing.

OneStep what can I say, you one the battle with ease
not sure why your battling a newb ? but it's all good do
what u gotta do.

Flow was alright, had a few nice punches and personals..

God made you lyricly gifted? Well that really doesn't help,
Cause kid you can't really get by without the ability to spell,*
^^ Ripped in the the opener ^^

Vote ~ OneStep

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