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Old 01-11-06, 08:23 AM   #31
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Voted For: Dopium

Reign won this battle, Nice attempt Allik but I wasn't
really feeling your verse.....

Reign ~ The structure was alright didnt really affect
the flow,.. I felt that some of your lines was pretty
predictable. And this bit u can tell was just a filler
and rushed... \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/

Knocking on her door patiently waiting for a answer.
She opened up to find out shes a belly dancer.

It don't really add up but thats the only fault I can
moan about !! sorry thats why I'm a Critic...

Vocab didn't really have any, flowed well, but uping
complexity. Other then that it was a pretty good
drop.

Allik ~ I liked the concept, the whole good side bad
side, but other then that the whole thing was pretty
basic. It flowed well, but no emotion, vocab !!! it was
alright.....

Vote Reign had a solid verse, and was a good read

Stay up both

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