Black Poet
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Voted For: Mentalz
Best topical battle I have peeped in a while both come
really dope, both using two different styles.
Mentalz ~ really nice writing fams, your verse was the
more complex. You had a very good use of vocab and
the flow was on point.
I liked the way you broke the verse up and the whole
concept of the verse. Trying to make people realise that
if you don't do nothing now you will just regret it in the
future.
Oz totally different concept to Mental and the style of
writing to. You verse was more fluid with great flowless
flow a very enjoyable read. The creativeness in the
story was great.
The reason I went for Mental was because I felt that
his verse was more complex, and a very solid drop. Oz
I think if you droped the same amount of lines u would
have taken this.
Stay up both and keep writing very enjoyable battle
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