wow..... umm..... i love u.... nah, seriously, this is really good.... most ppl on here will tell u that this is more of a topical piece, but i think this can be classified as poetry.... i'm feelin that it flows, but u didn't let it control how u wrote it.... it's like.... like ur racing.... lol, it's kinda hard to explain, but i'm feelin how the flow connects with the concept...... this is really good..... if u ever have a local poetry slam, u should drop this piece on em.....

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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