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Old 01-11-06, 08:34 PM   #11
Vaskez
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This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques.
^^meh ok
Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!
^^eh
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
^^guerilla and monkey associative worplay...so? kinda weak
Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield,
Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield.
^^meh comparison, not harsh
Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact..
..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act
^^heh, better
I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch..
..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch
^^ok but coulda been worded better
Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while..
Last time flow had a decent connection…
…was on his AOL 3-month trial.
^^heh, not bad flip
Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.
^^meh

vs.


Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
^^bland, but aight
This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim
Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs
^^ouch, it pains me to read such lame comparisons, lol sorry dude
Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew
Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food
^^agh! not another comparison, dude they're pointless unless they're funny! And it's not really worded into a diss

Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name
Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game
^^good concept, weak wording
Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats
But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks
^^heh, ok
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*
^^good (but lol@ explaining it, any decent textcee gets it anyway)
Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid
^^ok concept, bad wording
Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money
Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy
^^not really a diss


I think FI had the best bar of the battle, but Nick came more consistent. If FI had worded some of his good concepts better, he'd get my vote, but overall I think Nick just barely took it with consistency

v/Nick
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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