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yeah, spelling and grammar was bad, but not a bad piece, good way to angle it, because i know its a shitty topic...haha, but yeah, good stuff, the presence line was my favourite...but yeah, make sure you write with clarity and precision, dont dippsie doodle on lines, dont waste em, have every one contribute to your storyline, if you know what i mean, good stuff, and keep up man
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