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I come with free wording while you be burdened with
Whack rhymes leave cataracts in your spine my skills swift
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Don't really get what ur goin for here, cause its impossible to do what ur talkin bout, and u should avoid making 1 sentence into 2 lines, like u did with "with"
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I do work you just a true jerk why your brew don’t perk
Like coffee? Type softy with no talent why you won’t insert
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Basic multis here... dont really see why u tryin to damage this guy with basic multis that consist of no punches
The rest of the song is just pretty much the same, with some punches here and there
I can tell u kinda new to this thang. Keep workin.
~ UD