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Old 01-13-06, 07:41 PM   #11
Triple_N
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Typing as I listen....oh boy...another spul remix......flow hmmmmmm.....its structurely soild but its not right for this beat IMO.....u need to go wit a smoother flow..the rhythm u went wit wasn't right for beat......delivery also was structurely solid but jus not right for beat...u lacked the charisma this beat DEMANDS u have in order for it to be right.......plus this is a really R&B beat its not that easy to make a great R&B/ rap track..so u really had to be on point to get it...but u was jus lacking in areas....no hate jus realness......1
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