This was kinda wack, to be honest. U had a lot of played rhymes, some basic shit. I didnt see anythin innovative in there. U should work on ur metaphors and punches so that u can construct creative and productive wordplay, cause thats what makes diss tracks hot. Also, try to make ur structure balance ur verse, so that ur lines coincide with each other well. It will enable u to utilize punches easier. Keep workin

~ UD

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