oh dear god at u wreckin dis dope ass shadowville beat

the effct on ur adlibs is stupid, its mixed so ur adlibs n overdubs r louder than ur main verse. delivery is better but still forced. lyrics r poor, flow is boring - cnage up the rhymescheme stop jus rhyming end words, chuck a lil complexity in there to keep me interested. using a sample was an easy cop out of a hook, and i think this beat begs a dope hook. and now this MC rhyma kid is even poorer. his verse is mixed so low its ridiculous...wtf...who mixed this track, they need a slap...get rid of the talkin,it dont fit and sounds poor. and the way us ay "holla" is jokes.

me and some MC's r mekin dis shaowville beat 4 my 21st Century Warfare mixtape. in 4weeks ull hear how u cudda done sumin dope on this beat.

RTF on sumin done by me or MDog. 1
MTP 2006.

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