^Don't pm me askin for advice n shit. (@ unf) I gotta concentrate on makin myself unbelievably dope first.

Your elevating i suppose, i jsut think ur being a dumbass about it. This entire trackIN MYOPINION just sounds like a rush n bosh job, sumin i dont do when making a track unless im under immense pressure to knock sumin out 4 a deadline. I gurantee this track took u about 3hours or sumin, especially as dta shadowville beat aint been up long. if THIS took u 3/4 days: den QUIT rap...blud,take ur time...spit5.6times on the beat, experiment wid ur flow..everything about the way u wrote to this, i bet if u sent me da lyrics to this on msn id spice dem up in a matter of minutes. Try be original, loose the 16 hook 16 hook 16, god damn played as fuck structure on evry track. ur delivery sounds forced to me, cos i still feel u aint rappin naturally, u sound like ur tryina imitate a jae millz battle delivery or sumin to me, and the fake yank twinge on ur voice pisses me off, cos u cant pull it off especially wid the way u mixed ur vocals. if u cant mix, which u cant send em to sum1 who can, who can mix it 4 u. the way i think about makin tracks and saying their completed is would i be proud to hear that shit stream thru the airwaves, if i woulndt be..i re-do and re-work....as 50said "if shit aint dope , and ur makin it 4 urself. keep that wack crap in ur home niggaz"


MAd Thug Productions..2006 bitches.

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