Voted For: OneStepBeyond

allik war

Open:weak
Close:that could've been good but the wording did it in for me
meta:No the meta's were weak
Punches:The punches had potential in a few spots but never really got done right
Multies: I guess technically the same word counts but they weren't used right
Personal: tried to use his name but wasn't great, couldve been though

Osb
Open:It was little more then decent, punch was weak but the concept was good
Close:funny, i actually laughed at that one, Not out loud but it was funny
Metas: pretty good actually
punches:I don't think the punches were so hard hitting but better then war's
Personals: pretty good actually, nothing but actually

v/OsB


war you should stop with the paragraphing, try to work on dissing more and better, be more clever with your metas and punches.....start there, osb you need to hit harder with the punches




this type of voting is wack......by the way RTF or vote wil be erased

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