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Old 01-14-06, 03:29 PM   #14
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
good line 8/10
Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
lmao good personal only bad thing is the structure 9/10
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
ok line wasnt really feeling it 5/10
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
lmao funny shit 7/10
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
pretty cool line 6/10 kind of played
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
not feeling it 6/10
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
roflmao dope line 1st line was kind of blah but second line lmao at the wordplay 8.5/10
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo
ok line played though bad closer worst line in ur verse 5/10
overall 54.5

this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
not a good opener wasnt really a punch 5.5/10
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
he was at wendy's lol gotta do what hes gotta do shit is played now 6/10
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
kind of feeding off of his verse this could have easily owned the whole battle if it was worded better 7.5/10
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
ok ine didnt really hit that hard 6/10
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
pretty good line again could have been worded better 7.5/10
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
good line i was feeling it 8/10
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
not feeling it 6.5/10
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs
didnt make sense perhaps u worded it wrong mad stretched 6.5/10
overall 53

okay both of ur structures werent good spuls especially
kool. could have killed the battle if he would have worded shit right so overall i vote spul even though he dropped off in the second half of the verse
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