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Old 01-14-06, 06:11 PM   #13
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I'm definiteyly feeling this one man.....your flow is always on point so no change here. First verse had a little breathing problems in my opinion towards the end......it seemed like you were pausing too much or too long for breaths....anyway, you picked it right back up with the second verse. Breathing was much, much better. Chorus was pretty dope......over all a good track.

One more thing....your intro sounded......umm.....not like you. Your outro as well....:-\
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