whoa dude, this is extremely overlooked....probly because people are too lazy to read it all, but yeah, this was awesome....the vivid storytelling was amazing, the message hit very well and it just provokes every thought you have about life and death, it was awesome man, i love this piece, very well done....i would quote lines, but there were alot i liked, it was simple, yet effective, like, the way to told the story, was how you made it work so well.....very well done, this was awesome....good read....oh, and join OG

and rtf, or something

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