You Need Knack for This
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This was feedback posted for D-mat
IP:
biz- no real punchez in your verse. youve got nothing in this verse i like. work on your wording.
dmat- u need to work on your wording to make real punchez. also, try making some witty stuff. had a few ok punches.
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