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Old 01-15-06, 11:33 PM   #8
Germ
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From: Adanac
IP:

That stood defenceless, and exposed, the mark to hell,
Of uncontrolled revenge; fear uncontrollable as they fell

one of my favourites , and this one by po, i unno, just a good set up and makes you think

Loud noises, ears ring. As civilians run to take cover..
Why attack innocent humans?
.........................For the wrong doings of another..

good job, i agree, very poetic, very descriptive, well thought out...interesting topic, and the depth portrayed is very notable....you two put out a pretty darn good piece, good job to both, and keep up

hit up a link down \/ in my sig if you havn't hit them all yet, thanks
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