Sabre:

dope verse, i was feeling the concept you took. Good storyline nice little twist at the end. Creative wordplay and an easy read but not elementary. OK vocab and decent imagery, a couple lines could have been reworded better but other than that you wrote this topic well.

Overall: 8.5/10

Xplosive:

You also had a good verse, you kind of end in the opposite route using more imagery and emotion. Which is a good thing for topicals but i just wasnt feeling your verse as much, it was drawn out in my eyes. Still a decent read but alot of lines could have been said differently to give your verse that extra kick.

Overall: 6.8/10


Vote: Sabre

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