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Originally Posted by Young Un...
Thanks............
The Hook Is:
Sinful error's,a religious death
Sillouete of the moon leave you out of breath
The loss of a loved one it's all down to god
He could have saved them all but he let them rot
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not a good thing if you have to post the lyrics...
1 suggestion, deliver the hook more precisely...use repetition more often...keep it simple
