I Chill in Asylums
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IP:
This was good, loved the story. It flowed really well for me. And the vocab was really good in this, loved the internal rhyming. Imagery and emotion was all in there too. My favorite line was definately: "6 feet deep, wrists slit from the ankles to the teeth, breathed in poisons" I loved that line. Good drop man, keep it going. Please RTF on any of the links in my sig.
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