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Old 01-16-06, 10:56 PM   #16
Snypa
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Voted For: GKillaz05

i aint gonna break this down

G had better flow, but u both still need to work on it....couold be better

One Mic, u sound like ur trynna sing, if u have to stretch words to make it flow, expand on ur lines and make them longer, and u strugglin too much for breath.....

G, u have the ability to write, but ur flow is off, its seems to take 3 bars to get one rhyme, then 2 bars for the next, u needa be more consitant...

but all in all, G got this
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