Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB
We can battle text or audio..... Just cause I'm hott as hell,
I'll put 2 losses under your name... like you dropped the L's.
Eh, not the best punch. Nothing that original.
Ya sayin' you struggled... but sorry cuz this ain't a movie kid,
Only time your girls 'bye' is when she realized who shes with,*
Lmao. Nice personal.
You're fillin your raps worse......... i'm all killin this cat's words,
say i'm wack and ya dope? i think that raw killa is backwards,
Good play on his name.
Damn.... Look boy, I'd use your sig. against you but look it cat,
Scope the shit for personals and don't know what i'm lookin at,
Eh, not feeling this personal.
You ain't gonna become black, accept that you're white dawg,
Ain't shit changin no matter how many pic's you take with the lights off...
Ohhhhh ish. Nice personal.
You even suck at that, what you jumped off some kids boat,
And tried to drown yourself and forgot that SHIT floats?
Eh, this was ok.

Overall, you've got some nice punches, but you also have some lines I don't like. Just keep getting better bro.

allik war
hated on cuz im white steadily scream nigga,
"man allik war jus 1 hell of fuckin wigga"
why the fuck ya'll tryin 2 steady figure
da muthafuckin man behind my picture?//
No punch.
onestepbeyond said hes gonna beat me,
i gave my address 2 come meet me,
but continue's 2 do nuttin but e-greet me,
1 of 20+ pussies who wanna defeat me//
No punch.
fuck a metaphor i'll spell it out 4 u F-U-C-K Y-O-U,
this a rapsite but ya aviator show u jus a punk dude,
bang yo head against this wall ..............
like eminem"to all the people ive offended...yea F*U*2"//
No punch.
hate all you want I told you " i just dont give a fuck",
but 2day,2marrow,& da next day "I still dont give a fuck"
No punch
punchin ya keyboard the only time,u can punchline(s),
im barely breakin a sweat when its crunch time,
THA Q said u aint a rapper,so wuts up wit beinan actor
performin a bully role like we was set in a school lunch time//
Finally, a punch. Weak and played.
i break barriers of luv & hate,give new meanin 2 luvin 2 rape,
onestepbeyond,while im beyond all steps yet he stuck by 1,
havin pure fun while he stuck behind the window like drapes//
Bad attempt at personal.

Honestly man, this verse was straight out the worst thing I've ever read. You had two punches, which both sucked. You just tried to anticipate his punches, which didn't work. You need to work on actually making punches. You self glorify mostly.

onestepbeyond said hes gonna beat me,
i gave my address 2 come meet me,
but continue's 2 do nuttin but e-greet me,
1 of 20+ pussies who wanna defeat me//

Try this:

I leave this dude like the other pussies wantin me, down,
I gave him my address, yet I'm still not hearin any sound.

Or something like that. I'm not the best text battler, but you need to really diss, not just try and counter all his p unches.
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Overall, OSB got this easy.

OneStepBeyond

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