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Old 01-17-06, 02:01 PM   #12
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i have to give this to antic. dmat, like i said you ain't dissing anyone. you need to get some help on elevating, if you want i'll help you out......antic did have a few played out lines and lines that were shitty as well but he did come harder and structured his entire verse better. oh and don't use these -, these ' and these " in your verse so much, it makes it look unprofessional. but cut thesee - from it totally.
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