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Old 01-18-06, 06:28 AM   #8
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Really nice mellow track with deep heartfelt emotions,.. no intro
just started with the hock which was nice could have worked on
that a bit more but its all good.

G flowed well nice in the 1st verse u carried your voice well kept
the song really mellow, had deep emotions, I have lost a family
memeber from Cancer so I can really relate.

L.E whats good fam's, u kind of jumped messed up the mellowness
of the flow when u come in but u made it up, you sound good I kept
hearing a popin sound, not sure if it was on the beat.

Last verse and close was nice really emotion, dope track by both it
when well quick and it was a really good listen.

Stay up both

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