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Book of Genesis #2 (God Creates the World)
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01-18-06, 11:30 AM
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This Piece Was good, nothing amazing, but it was nice......i liked your rhyming and your flow was ok, off a bit in a few places. you should try to get more into that topic, that seemed more like a summary up.
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