word to my e-style nuccas. let me break this shiznit down like sausages nah mean?

Trey:
Dude...i aint get all the hype..to me ur jus another john doe
I made him look so bad at the sweet 16...mtv had to cancelled the show
ehh... shit's coo... 5/10
My Punchs need sparkin....i'm usin ur head as the flare
B my punchs'll Send u so far diaw south...The Suns'll charge him air fare*
nice try @ wordplay.... it's coo..... 6/10
Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth
The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's...
............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof
lol haha pretty nice.... 6/10
Ur houston jerzy is matchin the heater...when i put the rocket to ur chest
T's mac made mim do such a wind mill..
..............the nba put him in the slam duck contest
damn, nice wordplay.... good.... 7/10
son dont hate...cuz ya sis wanna play doctor wit me
I only charged yah family a checkup....cuz i felt she was a flat fee
it's decent...... 5/10
Damn the Secrets out....but the rest might cause doom
Yea i Always Kiss up to mim's...
........Sister when were alone in Her room
haha nice.... not really diss to him tho, but funny 6/10
Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men
if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again
lmao haha, that made me laugh... good..... 8/10
so ur predicted to win, but he prolly think i wont bother
knowin u wont come thru for the kids, like a bad father
ehh..... to basic.... 4/10
i'm wrapin his verse...cuz thats wat i do on a battle site
I said lets get it crackin....an he proceded to light up his pipe
it's ok....... 4/10
Stfu can get it too....yah bodys iced...an i'm meltin d's tricks
I put his grill in the wall so many times....nelly'll ask him to do a remix
it's coo....... 5/10

OVerall, you started decent in beginning, then got dope near middle, and fell off a lil near end. overall pretty nice verse good shit. 56/100 56%

Aiight mimesis:
We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first
While I decided to prewrite..
..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse
it's ok.... 4/10
I know my left hurts.. I'm shutting you up, sick of you talking, son
I won't tell you this one story.. I'll just push you headfirst off of one
lmao haha....... good... 9/10
And I saw the predictions.. saw some doubt about me ripping this kid
It laid out as a close, line.. but that's just what I'm hitting you with
good wordplay... 5/10
I'm dominating.. with all the bullshit he states he'll be tried for treason
I need a place to post my verses.. you need to provide a reason
ehh.... not feeling it too much.. 4/10
But yo, I pound keys.. sending cats in a spot between life and death
Ray pounds keys because he's blind as hell and has to bite instead
it's ok, got personal there.... 5/10
Our rankings tell the story.. your punches were pourin, but killed
Cause I can drop this quarter.. just by using a quarter of my skill
haha, nice wordplay..... 7/10
And SunU invited you to E Style.. but now we see Will's fucked
Cause loyalty to the squad doesn't mean SHIT when you still suck
ehh...... 4/10
Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit
But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment
it's ok.... 4/10
I'm ranked as one of the best.. while nothing that you say is art
I'm beating this fag, TM.. while all he wants to do is trade marks
haha nice..... 6/10
And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps
Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match
lmao shit had me rollin' dope. 9/10

overall, you didn't come as hard as i thought you would. Really unconsistent. like you had some dope lines, but then you had some wackish ones later on, but overall, pretty nice verse. not your best. 57/100 57 %

Overall, mimesis edged this one out. shit was really close. That closer saved you imo, mim. But overall good job to both.....

v/Mimesis

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