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Old 01-18-06, 06:39 PM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Trey MethodZ
Werd......lets go

Dude...i aint get all the hype..to me ur jus another john doe
I made him look so bad at the sweet 16...mtv had to cancelled the show
My Punchs need sparkin....i'm usin ur head as the flare
B my punchs'll Send u so far diaw south...The Suns'll charge him air fare*
Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth
The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's...
............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof
Ur houston jerzy is matchin the heater...when i put the rocket to ur chest
T's mac made mim do such a wind mill..
..............the nba put him in the slam duck contest
son dont hate...cuz ya sis wanna play doctor wit me
I only charged yah family a checkup....cuz i felt she was a flat fee
Damn the Secrets out....but the rest might cause doom
Yea i Always Kiss up to mim's...
........Sister when were alone in Her room
Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men
if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again

so ur predicted to win, but he prolly think i wont bother
knowin u wont come thru for the kids, like a bad father
i'm wrapin his verse...cuz thats wat i do on a battle site
I said lets get it crackin....an he proceded to light up his pipe
Stfu can get it too....yah bodys iced...an i'm meltin d's tricks
I put his grill in the wall so many times....nelly'll ask him to do a remix

*boris diaw on the suns


your wordplay isnt' bad just doesnt come hard enough. The bolded line was your best

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first
While I decided to prewrite..
..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse
I know my left hurts.. I'm shutting you up, sick of you talking, son
I won't tell you this one story.. I'll just push you headfirst off of one
And I saw the predictions.. saw some doubt about me ripping this kid
It laid out as a close, line.. but that's just what I'm hitting you with

I'm dominating.. with all the bullshit he states he'll be tried for treason
I need a place to post my verses.. you need to provide a reason

But yo, I pound keys.. sending cats in a spot between life and death
Ray pounds keys because he's blind as hell and has to bite instead
Our rankings tell the story.. your punches were pourin, but killed
Cause I can drop this quarter.. just by using a quarter of my skill
And SunU invited you to E Style.. but now we see Will's fucked
Cause loyalty to the squad doesn't mean SHIT when you still suck
Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit
But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment
I'm ranked as one of the best.. while nothing that you say is art
I'm beating this fag, TM.. while all he wants to do is trade marks


Those ^bolded lines were nice. More consisten & although it wasn't a ripping like I've seen you do before it did the job.

V/ Mimesis. Good battle.
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