ok good beat choice on the fab beat......ok good multies u opened.....flow in verse 1 is good.......however u coulda changed up more....ya rhyme scheme changed but the rhythm of ya flow didn't..given it the feeling of sounding the same.....ok hook.....this is mixed good.....its lyrical focus is wack but it has a nice flow...prolly coulda used sum addlibs or a more emphasized/exaggerated catch phrase to really make it jump out!....second verse....same as verse 1......rhyme sheme changes but the rhythm didn't.....so it gives it the impression of being the same..however it was a sound flow....verse 3 is same as other 2 verses..same feed can be applied.......ya delivery in all 3 verses was solid got a nice laidback vibe....it was calm but not monotone...good shit......pronounciation was solid here......overall sum of ya best work fo sure son......def keep dropping...improving & GROWING as a artist.....stay up fam.......1

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