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Old 01-18-06, 09:29 PM   #10
Vaskez
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You know the fans hate you, so you 'bout to throw a fit
So when the fans show me adore... I'll just kick you out of it
^^ok wordplay bit forced, since it's adoration they show
It's hard when you're the best, man, they all gunnin' for you
Your chances of winning are fat...
............. so it's no wonder you're runnin' to lose!
^^good concept, coulda been worded better
Your audio's garbage.Foreel, how cheesy was it?
At losing, just like the sayin', man, we all kno E.C. does it!
^^hehe quite funny
This battle's just like poker, yo, you know I'm raising, right?
I'ma fish for chips...
...............no stupid, don't get out your fork and knife!
^^corny
You got like 20 disses against you, damn, you must be hated, dyke
Peeped your pics, it's no wonder why you sound so constipated on the mic
^^ok straight simple punch
Got here by no-shows, I'm sorry, now I'ma pound you
Your luck is runnin' out...
............... and so is everyone around you!
^^heh not bad
Your audios suck, so does your text, you won't get far
Cuz your journey tripped down a-hole, and I ain't talkin' bout what you are
^^good concept, coulda been used better
Your style is weak, man, you're a pass. Ain't got me trippin'
Cuz it's E.C. to SEE E, and I ain't talkin' 'bout name flippin'!
^^aight

consistent verse, but I don't like your over-simple rhyme scheme, often just 1 syllable rhyming

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you keep stepping wrong man, you see, imma beast,
im hungry for more...
...and your just a skinny asain boy that needs to eat!
^^heh aight
this guys just sick!, believe me spul's the boss!,
man u front to much, n ill see ya back when u walk out with a loss,
^^good concept, weak wording
me lose this battle? ill sun you, but ya still be all smiliey
coz d/r's a bitch! but y does this wack fuck get ranked so highley,
^^meh
your just a blunder n i'm sick of battling silly hoes,
wanna see how he plays with balls? jus look at his fuckin videos,
^^meeeh
mate your a bit of a spac, seriosly u aint clappin shit,
n how can ya diss the u.k, when ya own town was named after it!,
^^good concept on him, wack wording (usually a question is a bad way to word a diss)
you little ghetto boy, u spit n ya mics got no pops on in,
n u claim Money Aint Shit, but we all know u got lots of it,
^^bad wording, aight concept
ya text is some corney shit man, how can u have me beat,
"its like sausages, nah mean!" but asains aint allowed to eat meat,
^^eh
you crash easy, see when u spit u make ya thunder sounds,
so just stick to commercial becuz u aint good enough for underground,
^^heh, aight


Actually it wasn't as 1-sided as the others say, but I still think Spul was more consistent

v/Spul
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